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Seiji
Sept 10, 2009 18:55:46 GMT -5
Post by tribbler on Sept 10, 2009 18:55:46 GMT -5
Name: Seiji
Affinity: Air
Race: Forest Dwellers
Occupation: Slave
Allegiance: Alias
Ability(ies): She Can Call "storms" By moving the Winds, Micing the Hot and Cold to make them.
Personality: Strong points, She is Very Good at Following Orders, it's what has kept her alive. Faults, If she doesn't like the task, it tends to be Painfully obvious, but she will still do it. Quirks, She tends to look down when someone "above" her, which is everyone, talks to her. Traits, She is of slim build, and she is rather strong depsite her size. Likes, She likes feeling "normal", when no one "looks down" at her for what she is. Dislikes, Broccoli is her #1 Dislike, secondly is hurting others. She doesn't like all of the decisions her master makes [whomever that will be]
History: She was born, to what she guesses was a poor family, or wise else would she have been sold? She grew up, being trained to be a servant, a slave. She knows nothing but "her place" which is no where, but at your masters side for every call and beckon..
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well it's kinda short, but ya.. I dont like doing bios XD
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Seiji
Sept 11, 2009 1:09:54 GMT -5
Post by Kswitch on Sept 11, 2009 1:09:54 GMT -5
This is a good start, but I think your history needs a little more work. My main concern is that this character is still too flat and lacking in background for it to develop properly. For example: Has anything happened to this character while being in slavery that may have had a significant impact on their personality? Try to delve a little deeper into the psyche of this character, talk to them, and find out what really makes them tick
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Seiji
Sept 28, 2009 22:41:35 GMT -5
Post by tribbler on Sept 28, 2009 22:41:35 GMT -5
*figits* I dont know what to do honestly, Other RP's I'm in, I tend to make it up as I go.. Because I honestly dont know o.o..
Any... Ideas?
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Seiji
Sept 29, 2009 18:01:59 GMT -5
Post by thanks4venom on Sept 29, 2009 18:01:59 GMT -5
Talk about her training. Answer these questions with each aspect of her personality Who? What? Where? When? Why? That will give all the info you need. ;D
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